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Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 14:55
Hello fellow members of the uk forum I came up with this brilliant idea of making a af story for every character of db to dbzgt!!It works like this Ill start a af story of goku and then 4 other people continue the story after the last person ends the story he/she will name another character and start his/hers af story.Every story must have a title.Then its goes on and on get it?

So I will start with the story of Goku

Title:Gokus Past Of Endless Power

One day it was a stormy day at gokus house all of a sudden a spaceship lands in front of gokus door.A strange creature emerges out of the ship and knocks on gokus door....

*Knock Knock*
*Goku opens the door*
*before goku can say a word he is punced in the face by the strnger and i dragged away.......

what happens next?

Brolly127
24-04-2005, 15:01
Hello fellow members of the uk forum I came up with this brilliant idea of making a af story for every character of db to dbzgt!!It works like this Ill start a af story of goku and then 4 other people continue the story after the last person ends the story he/she will name another character and start his/hers af story.Every story must have a title.Then its goes on and on get it?

So I will start with the story of Goku

Title:Gokus Past Of Endless Power

One day it was a stormy day at gokus house all of a sudden a spaceship lands in front of gokus door.A strange creature emerges out of the ship and knocks on gokus door....

*Knock Knock*
*Goku opens the door*
*before goku can say a word he is punced in the face by the strnger and i dragged away.......

what happens next?

Title: Broly reincarnated

whilst Goku was lying unconsius on the ship, the new incarnation of Broly was pondering about Gokus massive power level

*Goku:ahhh my head, what happened, WOOOOAAAHH!!*
*????: Do not worry kakarot it is me Broly*
*Goku:i see youve changed your ways Broly, why did you bring me here?*
*Broly:there is a war going on and i need your help*

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 15:06
Title: Broly reincarnated

whilst Goku was lying unconsius on the ship, the new incarnation of Broly was pondering about Gokus massive power level

*Goku:ahhh my head, what happened, WOOOOAAAHH!!*
*????: Do not worry kakarot it is me Broly*
*Goku:i see youve changed your ways Broly, why did you bring me here?*
*Broly:there is a war going on and i need your help*


Title:the metal race

Broly:the metal coolers are attcking my new home planet I need your help!!

Goku: okay lets go broly I will help

*as goku and broly reach broly new home planet,the metal coolers have a new leader,METAL KING COLD!!!*

Metal King Cold:MWWWAHHHHAAAA NOBODY CAN STOP ME!!!

Brolly127
24-04-2005, 15:10
Title:the metal race

Broly:the metal coolers are attcking my new home planet I need your help!!

Goku: okay lets go broly I will help

*as goku and broly reach broly new home planet,the metal coolers have a new leader,METAL KING COLD!!!*

Metal King Cold:MWWWAHHHHAAAA NOBODY CAN STOP ME!!!

Title: The death of all metal coolers

Broly:take care of him, i will destroy all of these pathetic worms
Goku: okay, make sure you come back in one piece(luffy,zolo, soz just had to say that :D )
Broly: now, feel the pain of a legendary super saiyan 4, GUAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

*Broly transformed into a LSSJ4 and with a blast the size of a tennis ball he wiped all the metal coolers out apart from their leader

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 15:13
Title: The death of all metal coolers

Broly:take care of him, i will destroy all of these pathetic worms
Goku: okay, make sure you come back in one piece(luffy,zolo, soz just had to say that :D )
Broly: now, feel the pain of a legendary super saiyan 4, GUAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!

*Broly transformed into a LSSJ4 and with a blast the size of a tennis ball he wiped all the metal coolers out apart from their leader


Title:King Colds Secret

King Cold:NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Broly:Your all alone now you cant win!
King Cold:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*Evil laugh*
Goku:what are you laughing at?
King Cold:I have a secret power that will detroy the universe!!!!!!!!!

Brolly127
24-04-2005, 15:26
Title:King Colds Secret

King Cold:NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!
Broly:Your all alone now you cant win!
King Cold:HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*Evil laugh*
Goku:what are you laughing at?
King Cold:I have a secret power that will detroy the universe!!!!!!!!!

Title: the Kings Bluff

King Cold: you 2 have done it now, i will destroy this universe, HAHAHA
LSSJ4 Broly: you really think so with your puny power level, its smaller than your peons of a soldiers

*Broly sneezed and king cold blew up*

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 15:31
Title: the Kings Bluff

King Cold: you 2 have done it now, i will destroy this universe, HAHAHA
LSSJ4 Broly: you really think so with your puny power level, its smaller than your peons of a soldiers

*Broly sneezed and king cold blew up*

Title:King Colds Suprise
*King Cold regenerated*

King Cold:MMMMMWWWWWAAAAHHHHHHHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LSSJ4 Broly:what the ****?!!
Goku:he..he..he regenerated himself??

Brolly127
24-04-2005, 15:37
Title:King Colds Suprise
*King Cold regenerated*

King Cold:MMMMMWWWWWAAAAHHHHHHHHAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
LSSJ4 Broly:what the ****?!!
Goku:he..he..he regenerated himself??

Title: Brolys awakening

Broly: just because you can regen doesnt mean we cant kill you
*Broly looked around and saw all the dead saiyans*
Broly: :madred: :madred: :madred: , i will make you pay for what you have done
*suddenly Broly started glowing black and eventually his skin turned black with silver hair and silver cuts all over him*
Broly: i am the legendary death saiyan that only comes in a 1,000,000 years

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 15:43
Title: Brolys awakening

Broly: just because you can regen doesnt mean we cant kill you
*Broly looked around and saw all the dead saiyans*
Broly: :madred: :madred: :madred: , i will make you pay for what you have done
*suddenly Broly started glowing black and eventually his skin turned black with silver hair and silver cuts all over him*
Broly: i am the legendary death saiyan that only comes in a 1,000,000 years


Title:King Colds 2cnd Suprise

King Cold:You think a change of hair and skin color can sacre me boohoo.
Broly:ultra green crystal Ka-me-he-me-hhaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Goku:AAAAUUUUUGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!A AM NOW SSJ5!!!!!!super black saphire ka-me-ha-me-haaaaa!!!!!!!
King Cold:Let me show you what I am capable of!!!!!!
*makes a enourmes red spirit bomb*
GokuSSJ5:THA THING IS HUGE!!!
King Cold:THI IS THE END!!!!!!!!!

greatkioman
24-04-2005, 16:11
errrr goku1226 told me to relpy

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 16:13
errrr goku1226 told me to relpy
no I meant by replying to the story..

greatkioman
24-04-2005, 16:15
no I meant by replying to the story..
soz i don't do word stories anymore

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 16:17
soz i don't do word stories anymore
OH okay then..can anybody else reply??

Saiyan spirits
24-04-2005, 16:17
Gokus Death(Well probs 5th)

King Cold:Broly The Legendary Death Saiyan Will Die for getting in MY way
***Knowing Broly Could not Stop Goku rushed infront of him***
King Cold:HAAAAAAAAAAAA-YAAAAAAAAA
***King Colds Bomb had killed Goku***

Nirvana Pheonix
24-04-2005, 16:20
same here so uhh i don't really like AF but I am the fan fic master but if I have to keep it short and can't use my full awesome potential
Japanese name:the new Goku is King super cold's final surprise and Broly's shortest transformation ever into short
eng name: Goku-out of this world!
little pink eletric blobs lie rage shenron formed goku
Broly: something's wrong! KAKAROTTO1(using japanese coz i wanna i know its kakarot)
goku: wha? broly's a kid again?
King cold; now to deastroy the finals two saiyans
Goku: i am not a Saiyan anymore
WHIRLWIND SPIN
King Cold: so you have a new move youre still a weak saiyan
goku: maybe this move will prove to you what I have become!
DRAGON THUNDER
the seven dragonballs appeared on goku's chest I am a dragon Omega shenron but good
Positive Karma Ball
King Cold was destroyed and then Goku atacked broly with his Shenron Dragon Fist or shenlong Ryu Ken in japanese. EXPLODE!
Broly wasd turned back to his adult form except he now had a scouter and long brown and green hair

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 16:21
Gokus Death(Well probs 5th)

King Cold:Broly The Legendary Death Saiyan Will Die for getting in MY way
***Knowing Broly Could not Stop Goku rushed infront of him***
King Cold:HAAAAAAAAAAAA-YAAAAAAAAA
***King Colds Bomb had killed Goku***


end of episode 1.

next storyof hercule

Title:Hercules stupidity,lameless,and lyineness

*One day hercule was walking bya the street when he bumpted into ceel.
Cell:Oh look what we have here, it´s the couard who lyed saaying he beat me!
Hercule:...........................

Nirvana Pheonix
24-04-2005, 16:24
actually i finshed the first story anyway
title: spirits dance and hold my hand in flurry walk with me on water! violent fist chanied
hercule cell where did you come from?
all of hercule's hair fell out
cell: well i've been asigned by king yemma to be your guardina
hercule: from who?
cell: everyone

legenderybroly
24-04-2005, 16:26
Title:King Colds 2cnd Suprise

King Cold:You think a change of hair and skin color can sacre me boohoo.
Broly:ultra green crystal Ka-me-he-me-hhaaaaaaa!!!!!!
Goku:AAAAUUUUUGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!!!!!A AM NOW SSJ5!!!!!!super black saphire ka-me-ha-me-haaaaa!!!!!!!
King Cold:Let me show you what I am capable of!!!!!!
*makes a enourmes red spirit bomb*
GokuSSJ5:THA THING IS HUGE!!!
King Cold:THI IS THE END!!!!!!!!!

Title: Is it the end ?

Broly: We need to fuse kakaroth or i kill you !
*broly stairs at he and gets white eyes*
Goku: Argghhhhh .. I DO IT ! But there is one thing i should not forget THAT IS MY PRIDE !
* Goku power´s up to SSJ 5*
Broly: Hiyaaaaaaah !
*Broly Turns to Mystick Super Saiyan*
King Cold: What are you fools doing you are just wasting your pathetic time on running away !
Goku: Darn it i neeed to power up higher to get to your lvl !!! Lower your POWER BROLY !
Broly: Sure Fool sure but dont forget that after we fuse we will fight !
* Broly lowers his power to gokus power *
King Cold: Just a little more !!!
Goku: Now Broly lets fuse !!
Broly/Goku: Fuuuuuuuuuuusiiiiiooooooooonnnnnn HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
* King cold throws his Bomb at Goly *
Groly: heh you think that is gonna hurt me fool ?
* Groly kicks the bomb away and it go´s right to the air *
King Cold: How !!! HOW YOU BRAT HOW !!!!
Groly: Who was a brat !? !!
* Groly stairs at King Cold and Rushes at him *

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 16:26
actually i finshed the first story anyway
hercule cell where did you come from?
all of hercule's hair fell out
cell: well i've been asigned by king yemma to be your guardina
hercule: from who?
cell: everyone

oh you finished it so you can pick which fighter you want next.who you want to begin the next story?

Nirvana Pheonix
24-04-2005, 16:28
I do? ok so the next story shall include... tapion

Goku 1226
24-04-2005, 16:31
I do? ok so the next story shall include... tapion
okay you have to start the story though.

legenderybroly
24-04-2005, 16:36
Title: Is it the end ?

Broly: We need to fuse kakaroth or i kill you !
*broly stairs at he and gets white eyes*
Goku: Argghhhhh .. I DO IT ! But there is one thing i should not forget THAT IS MY PRIDE !
* Goku power´s up to SSJ 5*
Broly: Hiyaaaaaaah !
*Broly Turns to Mystick Super Saiyan*
King Cold: What are you fools doing you are just wasting your pathetic time on running away !
Goku: Darn it i neeed to power up higher to get to your lvl !!! Lower your POWER BROLY !
Broly: Sure Fool sure but dont forget that after we fuse we will fight !
* Broly lowers his power to gokus power *
King Cold: Just a little more !!!
Goku: Now Broly lets fuse !!
Broly/Goku: Fuuuuuuuuuuusiiiiiooooooooonnnnnn HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
* King cold throws his Bomb at Goly *
Groly: heh you think that is gonna hurt me fool ?
* Groly kicks the bomb away and it go´s right to the air *
King Cold: How !!! HOW YOU BRAT HOW !!!!
Groly: Who was a brat !? !!
* Groly stairs at King Cold and Rushes at him *

Title: The end .

* Groly Rushed at him and kicked him at his belly and King Cold caughs blood *
* Groly flies up on the air and Prepares a Ultra black-green saphire crystal kame-hame-ha ! *
Groly: Kaaaaaaaaaaaaaaame-haaaaaaaaaaaaaamee.............HAAAAAAAA!!!!!
* a Thunder black beam goes trough King cold and he has a hole in the stomach *
King Cold: I am gonna take you to hell with me!!!!
* King cold make an Explosion and his explosion destroyed earth but Groly instant teleported to Namek for searching for the Dragonballs *
* Groly time has runned out *
Broly: Goku !! fight me !!!!
Goku: I havent time for this i neeed to find the Dragonballs !!!
Broly: To bad boy i am gonna destroy u before you get them !
Goku: Sure we will se about that !!
* broly make an Gigantic metoer that follows goku but goku prepares a Ultimate super saiyan rage kamehameha and it rips trough the gigantic metoer *

* Broly dies and goku flies and found the dragonballs peace was restroed on earth and it lived a thousand years *

Nirvana Pheonix
24-04-2005, 16:37
fine
tapion's journey of ultra maginficance and burning danger!
Tapion arrived in his time machine in.... the 1940's on the beahces of normandy where he instantly dodged bullets from both sides but he had given his sowrd to trunks
tapion: that doesent matter
ryu-spirit dynamite sword chant
playing his oricana tapion called the spirit of cell and that becmae a sword
german commando/er: tapion you coem with us now
tapion: you know my name what guy told you this!?
??? i did
minousha!
my brother!
ryu ken! expode! tapion trid doing the dragon fist attack on some german oilders as he thought minusha was udner control