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James_Han
03-09-2005, 12:36
DragonBall NG - Return Of Majin

3 years later after the 33rd under the sun tournament. goku and gojay
was flying in the sky
Goku- there has'nt been trouble on the planet for 3 years now
Goku got married to talla and gojay's 14th birthday has just passed
Gojay- thats good right?
Goku- yeaa......i should be careful what i wish for [smiles]
Goku and gojay flu down into east city too see krinin
Goku- boy. we have'nt seen krinin in months now, maybe we should have more
fights in the world Hahahahaha!!
Gojay- Wha!!
Goku- i mean, couse the only time i see him is when theres trouble opon the planet
Gojay- [confues] Okaay!?
They landed infront of his house, goku rang the door bell. there was a sound
of a child behind the door
???- Hello?
Goku- Ceko its me!
ceko opened the door a girl ran out and ran up too goku
Ceko- Goku!!
ceko hugged him
Goku- hahahaha!!
gojay smiled
Krinin came round the corner of the room
Krinin- oh..goku!
Goku- hay krinin hows it been
Krinin- fine
Goku- and have you and zhou got married yet?
Krinin- oh course not goku, you would have been invited if you was.....
Krinin looked over and saw gojay
Krinin- Gojay?....is that you?
Gojay- last time i checked .....yeah
Krinin- man you've grown!
Gojay- [smailes] thanks
Krinin- Please c'mon in.
Goku and gojay walked into the house, zhou walked in into the room
Zhou- hello goku!
Goku- Hay!, Zhou
Zhou- What brings you too east city?.
Goku- Gojay wanted too see krinin, you know how much he like him!
Krinin smiled and gojay blushed, Ceko sat down on the chair.
Ceko- Hay dad!, can goku and gojay stop for dinner?
Krinin looked at zhou
Zhou- yes of course
Ceko- Yaaay!!
Later, they all sat down at the dinner table. when all of a sudden goku, gojay
and krinin stopped, there eyes were wide open.
Ceko- Dad?!
Zhou- whats wroung?
Krinin- theres a trumendous power reading!
Goku- its huge!
Gojay- weres it c'min from!?
Goku- its strounger than super andriod 25
Gojay stood up
Gojay- No Way!!!......it tuck all i have to kill super anderiod 25, no way could this new
thret be strounger!!!.......I had to transform into a super saiyan X....too kill him
No way am i going into that form again, my body was burning, i was in pain all the
time, but i did gain tons of power......but when a went back too normal, i died
because i used too much energy and lost too much blood...!
Goku- .......Gojay?....you just might have too go into a super saiyan X
Gojay- maybe so!......
same time, Raiki and hijin was in the woods
Raiki- who could it be!?
Hijin- guuuur!. i dont know, but its alot strounger than the andriods
They flu up into the sky
Raiki- its coming from central city!
Hijin- you're not off.....are you?
Raiki- we must
Hijin- Right!.
Hijin and raiki shot of like a bullit to central city.
back at krinins house goku, gojay and krinin walked outside,
Goku- You ready?
Krinin- Yes!
Gojay- yeh!
there flu off. raiki and hijin flu across the canyon
Raiki- if this...thing is strounger than the andriods....we might need gojay to transform
into a super saiyan X
Hijin- you what!!? gojay died because of it!.....i highly dought that gojay will!
Raiki- were in trouble then
Goku saw raiki and hijin in the corner off his eye
Goku- hu?.....haha!, Raiki!!!!,....Hijin!!!
Hijin and raiki heard
Hijin- its goku! [smiles]
They flu up to them
Goku- you heading over too that power reading?
Hijin- yes......its realy powerful
Gojay- i wonder were he came from!
Krinin- dont know but he's sure powerful. it may take all of us together to take him
out
Goku- not even that!
Gojay gulpped. they all flu over the sea.
Goku- central city is just there!!
There was smoke coming from buildings and people screaming
Krinin- i think were too late goku!
Goku- Oh man!
They all landed on top of a building
Raiki- were is it!!
Goku-........i dont know, the power reading has gone
Everyones mind went deep, they all looked to there left. someone
was flying into a building
Gojay- who was that!!?
Goku- .......Its vegeta!
Vegeta fell out and crashed ontop off a car
Krinin- Oh no!!
a ki blast went flying into the car and the car exsploded
Hijin- Arrrrgh!
Raiki- Ggggaaaaaagh
Goku- VEEGETA!!
Drake, vegetas son age 15 went crashing into the road, he was in super
saiyan 2 mode
Gojay- Drake!!!!
Someone walked around a car, it was pink and small, with holes in its body
with steam coming out of it he was very small, and looked like a kid
???- Hehehehehehe!!!
Goku- Aaaaaargh, what on earth!!
The pink monster walked up to drake who was laying on the floor, it picked
him up and smashed his face into the ground
Gojay- No!!!
Gojay transformed into a super saiyan 4 and zoomed up too the pink monster
Gojay went for the kick, he kicked it in the face, but it was like goo, gojays kick
went stright into him and reflected him back
???- hahahahahahaha!!.....Buu squish you!!
Gojay- Buu?...
Buu- Gagagagaga!!
Gojay- hu....what a freak
Buu- Guuuur
Goku- Gojay whatch out!
Gojay- hu?!
Buu grabbed gojay and kneed his face
Gojay- Huuuk!!
Gojay fell on the floor, his noise was bleeding, gojay went back into a normal
saiyan, and fainted
Goku- no Gojay!!!!
Krinin- he's taken out vegeta, drake and gojay.....with ease!
Raiki- he's too powerful!
King Kai- He's Majin Buu
Goku- eh?.....king kai!!?
King Kai- i'm using tellepraphey to conmunacate with you, that monster you see in front
of you is non other than majin buu!, i cant belive he's came back alive
Goku- you're telling me he's been on this planet befor!!?
King Kai- and been resarected!
Goku- were'd he come from?
King Kai- He was cerated by Bibidi, a powerful wizard, majin buu destroys planets
you're great great grandfarther, goku,, killed this monster, you must also
Goku- but how?!
King Kai- ........the super spirit bomb...
Goku- The super spirit bomb?
King Kai- its a move i tought goku long long ago, you must use it against him!
Goku- But my spirit bomb will not do anything to him!
King Kai- just try goku!, just try!
Raiki- I think goku cracked up
Krinin- yep, i mean i have'nt seen goku talk to himself for years
Vegeta got out of the rubble
Vegeta- hay.......pink guy!!
Buu- hahahahaha!!......huh?....Buu squish who!?
Vegeta- Buu squish me!!.....no vegeta quish you!!
Raiki- vegetas lost all his power
Hijin- lost the plot more like it
Vegeta- vegeta, Must, Kill, Buu!
Raiki- ye you;re right
Drake struggled to get up
Drake- gojay?.....huh hu huh.....are you okay
There was no replay
Drake- gojay!!! .
Majin buu telleported
Goku- he's gone
Vegeta- were his he!?
Goku- Vegeta behind you!!
Vegeta- huh?..Goku?
Buu came behind vegeta and booted him in the back
Vegeta- urrrrrrrgggggh!!.
Vegeta went flying into a car then crashed into a shopping widow
Goku- No vegeta!!
Krinin- Goku we must help
Goku flu down, krinin, hijin and raiki followed. they landed infront
of buu
Goku- stop it buu!!
Buu tiltted his head and was looking abit confused
Buu- you.....
Buu pointed at goku
Buu- buu now you!!
Goku- no.....we've never met
buu- you!!!
Buu had a flash back of when he face goku and vegeta on the planet of the
kai's many many years ago, buu was trying to deflect the spirit bomb that
goku lobbed at him
Goku- You are a stroung fighter majin buu, maybe when you come back you'll come
back as a nice person, and maybe you and i could challange each other
one day
buu smiled
Buu- buu, and you must fight!!.......you said....when i come back,, you....and i .....will fight!!
Goku- what!!?
Buu- Gagagagaaa!!
Goku- huuuur!?
Buu telleported and reapired in the middle were goku, krinin, raiki and hijin are
standing, then tripped them all up
Goku- gaaagh!
Krinin- Huk!
Hijin- hu!
Raiki- taaagh!
then all landed on the floor, majin buu was in the air, he put both hands at
his side, a blue aruora formed around him, then a blue glow, glowed in his hand
Goku- [getting up].....Thats the Kamehameha wave
Krinin- [getting up] how on earth does he know that move
Buu unleahed the mighty kamehameha at them, befor it hit them, they all
jumpped out of the was. buu went ontop of a building
Vegeta- he's too stroung
Goku- Gojay!!. are you okay!?!?
Gojay struggled to get up
Gojay- gaargh...huh hu huh hu,,.....i've felt worse
Gojay was sweating
Goku- why are you here!!?
Buu- you said!!......you fight buu!!!
Goku- Ni i did'nt!!
King Kai- Not you, goku, you're great grandfarther promised that when he comes
back they'll fight once again....it seems that majin buu has'nt forgotten
Goku- .......Goku!?
Buu- YOU!!!
Buu jumpped of the building and ran up to goku, buu went for the charge, but
goku dodged it. buu skidded on the floor and quickly turned around and fired
a ki blast. goku got hit on his right arm
Goku- GaaaagH!
Buu- you weak!!!.....Buu come back when goku stroung!
Majin buu telleported away
Vegeta- he's like a baby!
Goku- my arm!.....its injurd badly. that blast did a number on me!
Krinin- if this is majin buu that distroyed the earth, he'll do a number on all of us
Goku- you mean, you know him
Krinin- not in person, my grandfarther told me stories about him, dont forget goku,
my great grandfarther and you're great grandfarther knew each other
Goku- yes i know
Krinin- and you're great grandfarther killed him
Goku- and!
Krinin- so must you.....
goku and gojay got home and sat down on the chair, tala came in
Tala- goku!?. you're arm!....
tala looks at gojay, gojay's face was coverd in blood
Tala- what on earth happened!!?
Goku- Majin buu
Gojay- he came....back
Tala- Majin who?
Gojay- yes!
Tala- no!....who!!?
Gojay- Majin Buu, he once romed the land and killed everyone, my great great grand
farther killed it long long ago
Tala- you aint making sence
Goku- tala?.......were doomed
Tala- eh?!
a news bulliten came up on the TV. there was a reporter in ginger town
anchor- we have some specile news
Reporter- hay im tao kellon and im here in ginger town.......
the all town was destroyed
Goku- just look at it!
Gojay- Majin Buu!
Reporter- earlier today a giant ball of flames came crashing down in ginger town
and killed everyone!!
all of a sudden the camara man dropped the camara, you could hear everone
screaming
Goku- what the!!?
on the camara there was a shot of majin buu walking by, he lifted up his arm
a pink ball of energy apired. then he lobbed it, the camara went blank
Goku- oh no!. hes gone on a rampage!
Gojay- what should we do?
Goku- i dont know but we cant let majin buu keep this up!.
Gojay- We must stop him!
There was a knock on the door. tala opened it.
Tala- arh vegeta..
Vegeta- Is goku here?
Tala, vegeta and drake walked into the room
Vegeta- goku?....i have good news
Goku- Yeh?
Vegeta- The hyper bolic time chamber!
Goku- wha?!
Gojay- the thing that i trained in dad
Goku- you mean at kami's lookout?
Vegeta- yeh!
Gojay- its gravity is strough, and it helpped me become a super saiyan 2!.
they all went to kami's lookout, goku, krinin, gojay, raiki, hijin, vegeta and drake.
goku and gojay was gonna go in when all of a sudden, BOOM!!
Goku- What was that!!?
Danda and popo came running in
Dante- Goku!!......its majin!......Majin buu is here!!
Vegeta- what? you're kiddin me..right
Goku- please tell me he is''nt
then there was another explotion!
Danda- who else is doing that!?
Goku- we need to train!
majin buu came walking down the hall were they were all stud
Buu- heheheheheee!!
Krinin- he's here [shacking]
Goku- Get ready too attack!.......3.......2.......1
majin buu came in site
Goku- NOW!!
They all fired tons of ki blast at him. Boom boom boom. they all stopped.
but the room was covered in smoke.
buu- heheheheheheee!!!
Hijin- he's still alive!
no one could see him since its smokey. majin buu crepped behind krinin
and grabbed him. krinin struggled. raiki ran up to majin and punched him
in the face but majin was'nt hurt but he did drop krinin
Krinin- guys over here!!
Raiki- you okay!?
Krinin- yeh fine!
Buu- gagagagaa!
goku and the others came
Goku- stop, majin buu!
Buu- you said fight!!.
Goku- that was'nt me!.
Buu- Gaaaaagh!.
buu started to glow and sparks started to rise and running all over!.
Gojay- whats happeneing?!
Drake- i dont know, but we better get out of here!!
the all lookout started to shack and started to fall apart
Goku- lets go!!
they all ran outside and jumpped of the lookout. they zoomed passed
Korins tower when the lookout exploded
Vegeta- Oh!, man!
They all reached the bottom, not soon after the rubble from the lookout came
crashing down
Krinin- look out!
Goku- yeh i know it blown it!
Krinin- no look out!!!
goku and the others looked up
all- aaaaargh!!
they all jumpped out of the way
Drake- i think buu blown himself up!.
Gojay- that could have killed us
Goku- well he's gone now
Danda- no!.....majin buu is still alive, dont forget i was here when the last buu battle happened
Goku- what you talking about!?
Danda- Majin Buu......can regenarate!.....realy fast
high in the sky they all heard an evil laugh.
Drake- he's here!.
a gaint pink beam came shooting down and hit all the Z-Fighters.
later they all pulled them self out
Krinin- *cough* *cough*
Hijin- awww man!
Raiki- A, CHU!!!
Goku- wow. is everyone okay
Vegeta- yeh!.
Danda- me and popo's okay!
Goku- Gojay?....Gojay!?
Out of no were....
Gojay- What!!.
Goku- were are you!!?
Gojay- i think im under you dad!
Goku moved, the stone slab moved and gojay pulled himself out
goku- good, no ones hurt
Majin buu flu down
Buu- gagagagagaga!!
Goku- Prepear you're selfs!!!.
Buu- Haaaaaaaaarghh!!!
Buu went crashing into the ground all the Z fighters went flying into the ground
Gojay- dad!
Goku- yeh!?
Gojay- let me and drake fuse together......we can do it!.
Goku- ..........okay [nodded his head]
Gojay smiled, gojay ran up to tell drake
Goku- we'll hold majin buu back whilst you two fuse!!.
Drake- Ready!?
Majin buu walked out of the smoke from the crash
Goku- NOW!! - Kaaaaa
Hijin- Meeee
Raiki- Haaaaaa
Krinin- Meeeee
Vegeta- Haaaaa!!
Goku, hijin, raiki, krinin and vegeta, all fired a kamehameha at majin buu
King Kai- the super spirit bomb goku
Goku- eh?
Gojay - Drake- Fuuuuu-sioooooon-----Haaaaa!
gojay and drakes body fused into each other, there was a glow, the glow
stopped
Buu- eh?......i re-member this!!.
Then out stud Gorake
Gorake- Majin Buu.....is mine!!
Buu smiled
Gorake- Micha kamehameha!!
A purple kamehameha came from gorake and hit majin buu into a lake not
too far were thery were fighting. Gorake went flying up to buu, buu
jumpped out of the lake and lobbed a ki blast at gorakes face.
gorake crashed into the forest
Goku- Gagh
Majin buu fired a cantinues ki blat at gorake, massive exsplotions went
off, the forest started too burn
Hijin- oh no!
Vegeta- even in fusion he's still the strongest!
King Kai- Spirit Bomb Goku!
Goku- the spirit bomb?
Vegeta- [looked at goku] eh?.
buu stopped, the forest was still burning.
Buu- you're......not the one!!! gaaaaaaaagh!!
Goku- he's coming!!.
Buu zoomed up to goku and punched him in the face, goku crashed
into the ground, leaving a trale of destruction
Krinin- HU!.....Distructo disk!.
A sharp yellow disk formed in krinin;s palm.
Krinin- DIE!!
Krinin lobbed the disk, it hit majin buu in neck and his head fell off
Krinin- yes!, i got him!
Vegeta- haha
Hijin- yes krinin
Raiki- why is his body still standing!?
Krinin- eh?
Buus head lifted off the ground and went back on his body
Goku- Majin buu can regenerate! ghugh huk.
Out no were a white ghost came. it looked like gorake
Krinin- gaagh gorake id dead!!
Hijin- and came back as a ghost
the ghost went up too buu, and holded out his arm, like he wanted
to shake hands, buu fell for it and shuck his hand
Ghost- hi! [smiles]
Buu- eh!?
the ghost glowed, then Kaboom, it blown itself up, buu's body parts
scattered all over
Gorake was flotting in the air
Gorake- Oh Yeh!!. hehe
Raiki- eh?.....so that was a move!?
Majin buu regenerated fast
Buu- guuuuuuuur!.
Gorake- oh...i forget he can regenarate [frowned] oh well [smiled]
Buu zoomed up to gorake and started to punch him, gorake was blocking
and dodgeing, gorake also did it back, the out come was the same.
they were telleporting all over, they were fighting high in the sky.
Gorake hit buu realy hard, buu went zooming down, he skimmed across
the sea and crashed into an island, he still was going till it stopped......
Boom, majin buu flu out of the rock and landed on the floor
Buu- guuuur!
A kamehameha beam went flying into buu, buu crashed into a mountain
Gorake- theres no rest when im about majin buu!.
Majin buu walked out of the crumbbled rock.
Gorake- ooo!, i see you're still ready for a.....
Befor gorake finnished his sentance buu went flying up to gorake
and elbowed him in the chin
Gorake- Guuuuurur!
Buu exstended is antana and wrapped it round in right leg
Gorake- wha!!.
Buuswung him around and slung him into the ground!. it formed
a giant crator
Buu- gagagaggagaaaa!!.
Goku and the others were whating from the sky.
Vegeta- drake!.
Goku- come on gojay!.
King Kai- the spirit bomb gokuuu!!!!.
Goku- i caaaant!!!!.
Vegeta- goku?.....are you feeling okay?
Goku- ......huh hu huh.......ye yeh!.
Buu holded one hand into the sky, a giant pink ball formed.
Buu- Huuurraaaagh!
Buu lobbed it down at gorake
Gorake- HUK!........hurrrrrraaaaagh!!!!.
Gorake went into a super saiyan 3. The ball still hit him.
Gorake crashed into some bushers
Goku- (i should use the spirit bomb, but my spirit bomb will not work!)
Vegeta- c,mon!!!
Gorake got out of the bush
Gorake- awe man!.
Buu- gaaaaaaar!.
Gorake- you still here?
Buu- buu!!!.
Gorake- gaaaaagh!.
Gorake fired a yellow beam out of his left hand, buu dodged it
Gorake- dang!.
Gorake ran up to buu. buu telleported
Gorake- were'd he go!?
Buu was behind him, buu then kicked gorake in the back of his head
Gorake- Gaaaaaagh!!!
Gorake crashed into a rock
Goku- gorake....hurry the fusion does'nt last!!!
Gorake- [rubbing his head] yeh i know!!.......argh that hurts!!.
Buu- heheheheheheh!.
Gorake- yeh yeh!.
Buu ran up to gorake
Gorake- aaah!.
Buu streched out his right arm into the ground. there was a rummble
underneith gorake
Gorake- eh?
Buu's hand zoomed out and grabbed his face
Gorake- huk!
Goku- aaaaaaaagh!.
Krinin- buu!!!
Buu lifted gorake realy high and realy fast back down into the ground.
the ground crummbled!.
Vegeta- let go of him!!.
Raiki- we should help him!.
Goku- wait!
Buu broung his arm back to himself
Buu- [evil grin] heeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
Gorake- gaaagh!.
Buu punched gorake in the stomache. gorakes eyes started to close.
he capt on punching him
Goku- Buu nooo!!!.
Buu's eyes open wide, he heard goku shouting. buu had another flash
back.
*buu was going to through i bif pink energy ball to blow up the earth*
*Goku- Buu nooo!!!.
buu dropped gorake, gorake was knocked out
Hijin- gorake is out for the count
Vegeta- majin buu is coming!.
Buu zoomed up to the z-fighters
Goku- get ready!.
Buu went above them and fired a beam down towards them, they all went
crashing into the sea
Buu- gaaaahahahahaha!!!
The sea glowed......Yellow ki blast shot out of the water, buu was
dodging them all. they all zoomed out of the water krinin fire a distructo
disk at buu and cut him in half, but he quickly regenerated.
Goku, hijin and raiki fired a kamehameha and fired buu into the island
floor. vegeta was flotting above him.
Vegeta- FInal Flaaaaash!!!.
There was a flash off light and a yellow beam shot down at the island
and blow it up. Majin buu telleported behind vegeta and kicked him in
the back. Vegeta quickly stopped himself from crashing into the sea.
Goku zoomed up to and went to punch him, but buu dodged it.
Krinin zoomed and went to kick him, but buu dodged it.
Hijin and Raiki went to fire a kamehameha, but buu quickly telleported
away.
Goku- gaaaagh, he's too fast!!
Buu reappired on the island were gorake was laying.
Raiki- hes there!!!
Majin buu picked up gorake
Goku- BUU!!!
Vegeta- Oh noo!.
Buu opened his hand out straight. Gorake opened his eyes
Gorake- heeeer!!.
Gorake glowed
Buu- haaahahahahaaa!!.
Buu stuck his hand into the glow, two glow balls shot out and landed
on the floor. the glow stopped it was drake and gojay
Gojay- aaaw my head!!.
Buu- gaaaaagh!!.
Goku- the 30minutes went fast!......But that was closed. great timing boys!!.
King Kai- God dam it goku!!!....the spirit bomb!!!.
Goku- i've told you mine wont do nothing!
King Kai- the spirit bomb gathers energy......and spirits...thats why its the spirit
bomb!
Goku- meaning?
King Kai- Gather spiritul energy from all humans across the planet..... and the plants
You'll form some kind off....super spirit bomb....the thing that killed majin
buu the last time he was here!!.
Goku looked up high.
Goku- Off course!!
Krinin- off course what?
Goku- spirit bomb
Krinin- you're spirit bomb wont do a darn thing!.
Goku- but a super spirit bomb will!
Krinin- It will?
Goku- Vegeta get the boys out of there!.
vegeta flow down and pickd up gojay and drake and tuck them to another
island.
Goku- ready!!!
Krinin- yeh!
Vegeta- yeh!
As goku rised his right hand into the sky majin buu zoomed up to him,
quickly krinin booted him away!
Krinin- i'll hold him off goku, you gather it as fast as possible okay?.
Goku- yeeah!!
Whilst krinin was fighting majin buu, energy was forming around gokus hands
It got realy big
Goku- is this from the humans?
King Kai- to gather them from humans you must tell them to rise there hands
Goku- what how are we gonna do that:?......Vegeta, hijin, raiki, drake, gojay!?....
Rise you're hands now!!.
They all put there hands up. shiny glow came out of there hands and into
the spirit bomb. but krinin could'nt hold of majin buu much longer.
krinin fell and crashed on the floor
Goku- krinin!!!.
King Kai- Dont bother about them, just think about the spirit bomb okay?.
Vegeta transformed into a super saiyan 3.
Vegeta- i'll hold him off goku!!
Vegeta went and punched buu in the face, buu crashed into the sea.
King Kai- I'll send a message across the planet.......and maybe namik
Goku- who?.
Vegeta fired a final shine into the sea, but buu was behind him
Vegeta-- what!?
Buu went to kick him, but quickly vegeta telleported away.
vegeta was high in the sky
King Kai- Its done!.
Lots of spiritul energy cam towards goku and the spirit bomb.
the bomb got realy big
Buu- guuuut........that bomb!!.
Buu's mouth and eyes opened wide
Goku- yes buu!!!.......this is the spirit bomb that wipe you out...many years
ago.....and i'll make sure that you wont come back!!!
At a small planet were king kai lives.....
King Kai- yes........goku has done it
???- ......Good..[smiles]
Back at earth
Buu- gaaagh!.
Buu zoomed up to goku, drake and gojay stopped him by grabbing him
Buu- gaaaaaaaaagH!!!
Gojay- not this time buu
Drake- you're going down, if you like it or not!!
Goku's spirit bomb was huge
Goku- its done!!
Vegeta- yes!!.
Goku- [closes eyes, smiles]......good bye....Majin Buu!.
Buu- Gagh gah gagh!!!.
Goku slowy moved his hand forward. the spirit bomb followed!!.
The bomb went stright towards majin buu.
Buu- gaaaaaaaaaaaghhh!!!.
Drake- NOW!!.
Drake and gojay pushed majin buu into the spirit bomb.
Buu- gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaagh!!!.
Buu's body parts started to crumbble
???- that spirit bomb is strounger than the one that killed him last time
King Kai- Goku's unique.......just like....son goku
???- [smiles]
Goku- good bye majin buu!!!........Good Bye!!.
The spirit bomb hit the ground and blow up, you could see the exsplosion
outta space.

3 days later
Goku and gojay was flying in the sky, to krinins house
Goku- i wish
Gojay- dont you dare say it!.
Goku- say what? [grins]
Gojay- you know what [smiles]

THE END............Or is it?.

ssj4nick
03-09-2005, 12:48
Hey James nice story but who are all those characters :mefiant: ?Are they from your forum ,because people who are not in your forum won't understand your story.Could you please write your made -characters biographies?

sayainpride4
03-09-2005, 18:10
Seriously dude, that story was pointless. Why make up your own story if your gunna use characters from other anime's. Goku's son was Gohan and Goten, and he married ChiChi. :mefiant: Try to make a dbz story we would of liked it better dude. :wink2:

HAHA Buu came back as Uub. You should make up your own characters, which means take away the name Goku and Buu. Then get a different name and then make your storys.

James_Han
03-09-2005, 21:19
Seriously dude, that story was pointless. Why make up your own story if your gunna use characters from other anime's. Goku's son was Gohan and Goten, and he married ChiChi. :mefiant: Try to make a dbz story we would of liked it better dude. :wink2:

HAHA Buu came back as Uub. You should make up your own characters, which means take away the name Goku and Buu. Then get a different name and then make your storys.
Its goku JR son. (from DBGT movie) thats why its called Next Generation
and the thing about buu, is that Uub died then for some reson he came back as the old evil Kid buu.

[devil_inside]
03-09-2005, 21:50
right and this is for...sorry just donīt see the point!

SaiyanBlade
03-09-2005, 22:02
I guess it was alright...You could have added abit more depth into it...But other than that, good effort... :wink2: specialdri

sayainpride4
03-09-2005, 22:19
Its goku JR son. (from DBGT movie) thats why its called Next Generation
and the thing about buu, is that Uub died then for some reson he came back as the old evil Kid buu.



HAHAHAHHA.... Well the name Gojay or what ever the hell his sons name is is pathetic. Why not name him Kakarot??? Sounds like dbz and makes perfect sense. Also Drake? thats like a american name... Dude just give up this NG **** sucks, and there is no point because all your doing is getting people to say it is good and it sucks. It will never be a real series so why not quit and make your own series. Also there wasn't a series for Goku Jr so now his son :mefiant: Retarded.

[devil_inside]
03-09-2005, 22:49
i canīt read what saiyanpride says cos he his on my ignore list so... but how does goku jr knows the spirit bomb?

[Saiyan_Demon]
03-09-2005, 23:42
Goku JR Knowing the Spirit Bomb is a Huge Technique for him. But seeing that Goku is his Ancestor, i'd Say King Kai tought him it Telepathically.